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Thursday, August 10, 2017

Imaginary danger

Imaginary danger
The shower was shiny and sparkly clean before Buster Busted through the door. Jamie sprinted through the door to get to Buster. Jamie slammed the door and turned the shower on. They were in the shower ready to clean buster but, the icky, slimy mud clogged the drain and the glass shower door was stuck and wouldn’t budge so Jamie tried to turn off the shower but the handle broke off and the shower was filling up with water. Buster was jumping like a bunny in a box because scared that he would die. Jamie was ramming the door to try to get out of the shower but the door is stuck like cement.Jamie realises there a crack in the glass. So Jamie swims like a fish with no water to the crack in the glass. Jamie starts to bash the glass to try to break it.The crack in the glass started to get bigger but Jamie started to lose breath so Buster busted  the glass and saved Jamie.
                                                                                                                     

By Hunter W`

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