Soccer is so fun
When you're In the sun
I play it every day
Next to the hay
I hit the ball
Right over the wall
Tuesday, August 15, 2017
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Hi Hunter I think that this poem is clever and I can tell you like soccer. I can tell that you worked hard on this poem and should be proud of it. From my advice I recommend that next time you say "Next to the hay When I hit the ball It goes over the wall. Once again this is brilliant and hope to see more poems like this in the future.
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